The following exercise has
been designed to help you grasp the basics of essay organization. In each case,
the introduction and the conclusion will be provided along with notes for the
development. Read the introduction carefully and make sure you understand the
reason for the organization of the essay. Then write the development in
accordance with the suggestions provided. You may need to do research to expand
on the points. A word of warning: this not the only way of organizing this
essay but it is one that works.
In the
past, due to lack of birth control, the existence of large rural communities
where manpower was an advantage and custom, large families with a dozen or so
children were quite common. Infant mortality was high and some would pass away
but others survived to till fields and plough the land. In the modern world,
over population, the widely publicized disadvantages of a large young
population, changing life styles and the existence birth control have shrunk
families with only children becoming ever more common. In China, it is
forbidden by law to have more than one child. Although this is the current
trend, it doesn’t mean being an only child has only advantages; there are
disadvantages as well.
First developmental paragraph: advantages
·
Material
benefits ( good schools, more possessions, holidays, opportunities to study
abroad, being the parents only heir and the like)
·
The
focus of parents love and attention
Second developmental paragraph: disadvantages
·
The
need to carry parents responsibility alone in old age
·
No
uncles, aunts, cousins and the like
Note
to the student: not learning to share and being spoilt have not been included
for the reason that most modern kids go to kindergarten very early on and
siblings are replaced by peers.
In
conclusion, smaller families with only children are becoming more and more
common in the modern world as people marry later after completing their higher
education and gaining the wherewithal to make a home. Once married, couples both continue with
their active careers making large families impractical. Whether for good or bad, extended families
have now been replaced by friends and a social circle though many will often
think back on the good old days of larger families.
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