Tuesday, April 9, 2013

RESEARCH RELATED ADVANTAGES DISADVANTAGES ESSAY: CITIZEN JOURNALISM



The way we report and access news has been changing in the modern world with ordinary citizens taking an active part in the process. Thanks to modern technology, the man on the street can now contribute his penny’s worth to mainstream news; a fact that many media channels recognize and encourage Yet what are the advantages and disadvantages of citizen journalism? Access the links below, read and annotate the texts and then listen to a few videos.
Refer to my second blog, The Essay Archive, for sample essays: https://theessayarchive.blogspot.com.tr/  
1.       “What is Citizen Journalism?” By: Tony Rogers, journalism.about.com
2.       “What Advantages and Disadvantages do Citizen Journalists Pose for Mainstream Media?” laurenjohannaholbrook.blogspot.com
3.       “Citizen Journalism: Discussing the Growing Movement”  inrochester.org
4.       “The Pros and Cons of Citizen Journalism” emersonecom.wordpress.com
5.       “Citizen Journalism: A Primer on the Definition, Risks and Benefits and main debates in Media Communications Researchwww.theopennewsroom.com ( This is the most formal of the texts suggested)
6.       For Slides: www.slideshare.net ; here access “Citizen Journalism” to look at the photos uploaded by citizen journalists
7.       Last of all, google “The Advantages and Disadvantages of Citizen Journalism” click videos and watch a few.
Now, collect your notes together and write your advantages / disadvantages essay. Remember to include your own views too and do not copy paste!

Monday, April 8, 2013

RESEARCH RELATED PROBLEM SOLUTION ESSAY: LONELINESS



In the modern world, we live in ever more crowded urban areas like sardines in a tin rubbing shoulders with hundreds of people on a regular basis yet we are more isolated than ever before. The anonymity of city life seems to lead to isolation and extreme loneliness to the extent that has never been seen before. Chronic loneliness is a debilitating problem that can bring great misery and even suicide. So how do we go about this ever growing problem? Before putting pen to paper, access, read and annotate the texts below; then listen to the video and make notes.
Reading material to annotate
1.                  “Why Loneliness Can Be Deadly?” http://www.livescience.com/18800-loneliness-health-problems.html
2.                  “Loneliness Kills, Study Shows” http://www.livescience.com/697-loneliness-kills-study-shows.html
3.                 “The Causes of Loneliness; what is yours? http://www.lonely-people-champion.com/causes-of-loneliness.html (It is suggested that you study the links on the left of the screen when you access the site and read the texts related to the topic)
4.                 “Loneliness, what it is and how to get rid of it” http://www.selfgrowth.com/articles/Seepersad1.html
5.                   “How To Handle Loneliness” By Wyatt Myers, http://www.everydayhealth.com/emotional-health/how-to-handle-loneliness.aspx
Videos to watch and make notes on
1. "How to overcome loneliness"http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6RHWBykFBPo
2. "Loneliness" by University of Chicago professor, John Caccioppo http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=E0qE90GDOhw

As soon as you have completed your research, write a problem solution essay concerning the issue.


Refer to my second blog, The Essay Archive, for sample essays: https://theessayarchive.blogspot.com.tr/  


Sunday, April 7, 2013

RESEARCH RELATED PROBLEM SOLUTION ESSAY: BULLYING IN SCHOOLS



Bullying, both verbal and physical, has been endemic in schools all over the world for a very long time leading to untold misery and even suicide. If you google "Bullying Victims Suicide", you will find the tragic stories of the those who succumed to the bullying and chose to end their lives. In the modern age where attitudes have changed, the current state of affairs can’t be allowed to continue. Both the authorities – including teachers and principals – and parents have a lot to do to reduce the suffering caused by bullying in schools. Before you get down to writing, it is suggested that you do some research. Access and read the following texts annotating the whole while.
Reading material to annotate:
1.       Bullying in Brief “” http://www.kenrigby.net/Bullying-in-brief
2.      What Schools can Do” rhttp://www.kenrigby.net/What-schools-can-do (Click ‘more’ for more information)
3.       What Parents Can Do” http://www.kenrigby.net/12-Prevention
4.      “Bullying at School and Online” http://www.education.com/topic/school-bullying-teasing/ (The site is devoted to bullying and there is a lot to read so study the website carefully)

5.     “Bullying An Age-Old Problem That Needs New Solutions” By Shelly Hymel and Susan Swearer  http://www.education.com/reference/article/bullying-about-power-and-abuse-of-power/
6.  “Bullying Facts and Solutions: Upsetting Statistics and 4 Actions You Can Take” By Irene van der Zande  http://www.kidpower.org/library/article/bullying-facts/

Videos to watch and make notes on:

  1. Nobody likes a bully. How to stop bullying in schools” http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XCPKMWyF1Lo
  2. “The most beautiful way to stop a bully” http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1LNPeGT9H-Y
  3. “You are you” http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=l8ovOA7VhFo
  4. “Just being me” http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_5WRpYmInQ4
  5. If you google bullying at school and click videos, you will find many documentaries and videos on the topic. Select a few more to watch before you write
  6. Documentary to watch
  7. ·         “Web of hate” http://topdocumentaryfilms.com/web-hate/  
Refer to my second blog, The Essay Archive, for sample essays: https://theessayarchive.blogspot.com.tr/  

READING RELATED ARGUMENTATIVE ESSAY: SHOULD THE CORRECTION OF UNIVERSITY LEVEL ESSAYS BE LEFT TO ARTIFICIAL INTELLIGENCE?



Thanks are due to my friends and colleagues Oya Özağaç and Kerem Özkan for sending me the text and allerting me to the possibilities
With the emergence in recent years of on line courses like Coursera (coursera.com) and edX and on line universities like Udacity (udacity.com), it was only a matter of time before attention turned to automating the correction of essays.  In an article published in The New York Times (nytimes.com), the latest innovations in the field as well as arguments for and against using artificial intelligence to correct essays is discussed. Read the essay, “Essay Grading Software Offers Professors a Break” by John Markoff , published on April 4, 2013  and annotate it . Once you have done so, research the online courses and university mentioned above to discover how they operate. Last of all; write an argumentative essay using the suggestions below. Link below:
In your introduction, describe how exactly the software works briefly and write a thesis statement expressing your view. At this point, you have three options: you can completely support the software, be totally against it or consider it a second best which could exist in tandem with the classic system. A word of warning: use your notes to write the introduction but don’t be too long winded.
In your development, consider the points below:
Arguments for using the software:
  1. Immediate feedback: students sometimes wait ages, learn faster with instant feedback
  2. Turns essay writing into a game by letting student resubmit work until correct
  3. With increasingly large classes, meaningful feedback impossible
Arguments against using the software:
  1. Automated grading all right for T/F and multiple choice questions not essays
  2. Software can be fooled
  3. Software not compared to human correctors
  4. Computers cannot ‘read’
  5. Teaching students to think critically requires human graders
In your conclusion, make a restatement; alternatively, if you have decided on a compromise, state what it is. If you are against it but consider it unavoidable in certain circumstances, specify.
Refer to my second blog, The Essay Archive, for sample essays: https://theessayarchive.blogspot.com.tr/  

RESEARCH RELATED ARGUMENTATIVE ESSAY: SHOULD GAY COUPLES BE ALLOWED TO ADOPT?


Thanks are due to Özge Çağlar Aksoy and her class for this writing activity
In many western countries, gay couples are now allowed to have civil unions legalizing their relationship. They now wish to be allowed to adopt like heterosexual couples. Write an argumentative essay for or against allowing gay couples to adopt. Before you do so, you will need to determine the main arguments for and against and to do so, it is suggested that you access the following texts and annotate them.

Refer to my second blog, The Essay Archive, for sample essays: https://theessayarchive.blogspot.com.tr/  
1.       “Florida Court Overturns State’s 31-Year Ban on Gay Adoptions” By L.K. Regan www.realjock.com
2.       “Study Shows Children Adopted By Gay Couples Are Emotionally Healthy” By L.K. Regan www.realjock.com
3.       “US Signs UN Statement on Gay Rights, Reversing Bush Refusal” By L.K. Regan www.realjock.com
4.       “Should Homosexual Partners Be Allowed To Adopt?” By Brandon Wegner
5.       “Who Sets Standards of a Suitable Parent?” By Maddie Marquar
Now, check out some videos. You will find plenty on voanews.com. Listen, watch and make notes. When you have done so, gather your notes and write your essay defending your own point of view and refuting counter arguments. Remember not to copy paste; use only your notes not the texts.


Saturday, April 6, 2013

NEW ARTICLE NOW AVAILABLE

My new article "Fear of the Unknown: Low Tolerance of Ambiguity" is now on the Humanizing Language Teaching website under short articles. If you are interested, click www.hltmag.co.uk and then click current edition. I would be interested to know what you think so get back to me with your views.

Wednesday, April 3, 2013

LESSONS FROM EASTER ISLAND



By: Clive Ponting
About this text: this is a chapter excerpt from Clive Ponting's “ A Green History of the World:  The Environment and the  Collapse of Great Civilizations”; access www.primitivism.com  click anthropology and then click the writer’s name. Alternatively, just google thetitle and author’s name.
Level of Difficulty:**** (Due to the vocabulary load)
Thanks are due to Oya Özağaç for locating the soft copy of this text and helping with the typing up of the questions
BEFORE YOU READ
·         What do you think the effects of the earth’s rapidly dwindling resources will be on life?           
·         Do you envisage conflict or cooperation in such circumstances?
Now, research Easter Island to discover its location and see the wonderful statues that remain to this day. Then, try and unravel the mystery that surrounds these statues.
QUESTIONS
1.  What sentence in paragraph one sets the tone of the article to follow?
2. On reading paragraph two, we reach the conclusion that the island was characterised by squalor and barbarism. What proof can you find of this claim?
3.   Why exactly did Easter Island become the mystery it did?
4.   Thor Heyerdahl`s contention that the island was first settled from South America is based on the fact that _________________________________________.
5.  What, in your opinion, is the significance of paragraph four for the whole article?
6.  What proof can you offer the claim that the Polynesians were the greatest explorers of their time?
7.  How inhospitable do you consider the conditions on Easter Island to have been? What do you base your opinion on?
8. a. Why were the inhabitants of Easter Island reduced to subsisting on sweet potatoes and chicken?
    b. What additional advantage did the cultivation of the sweet potato have?
9.  What were the two important consequences of the social organization of the Islanders?
10. What proof can you find in the text of the contention that the islanders were highly intellectual people?
11 a. The most difficult hurdle the ıslanders had to overcome concerning the statues was.........................
      b. What was the ultimate significance of the method of transportation resorted to concerning the statues?
12. How did the scientists reach the conclusion that Easter Island was not initially the barren island it later became?
13. Trees were used for various purposes by the islanders. Which of these probably sealed their fate according to the text?
14.  What was the effect on daily life of the sudden lack of trees on homes and on boats?
15. What was the cause of the continual fighting and cannibalism which followed the complete deforestation?
16. What behaviour of the former Islanders seems impossible to comprehend according to the text?
17.  a. What parallelism can you draw between Easter Island and our world?
       b. To what extent do you think our fates will resemble theirs?

VOCABULARY
paragraph
1
Lack of importance


2
Very small, insufficient (1. half)


4
That which cannot be altered


4
To put up with


5
Include, cover (2nd half)


6
Survival


10
Enormous (2nd half)


11
Very serious (1. half)


12
To deteriorate (1. half)


12
Terrible (1. half)


13
To keep and protect

WRITING TASK; FIRST ALTERNATIVE
Take another look at the last question, determine your position and write an opinion essay detailing your views.
WRITING TASK; SECOND ALTERNATIVE
Write an essay discussing the fatal consequences of deforestation. Use the points below, the text you have just read and notes you make from any additional research you do.
·         Draught
·         Climate change
·         Land slides
·         Loss of habitat
·         Extinction of species
·         Social upheavals and war
·         Loss of essential resources
WRITING TASK; THIRD ALTERNATIVE
Write a problem solution essay discussing how to prevent deforestation and avoid the fatal consequences of this man made disaster. Before you start, do some reading and listening, make notes and use them to write your essay a long with the text you have just read.
·         Outreach programs to raise public awareness( to educate farmers, and other members of the public)
·         The banning of camp fires in forests
·         The deployment of forest rangers
·         Education starting early on
·         The planting of appropriate trees ( for example, not planting pine trees in hot zones)
·         Making the planting and preservation of trees a national policy
·         Using the media to change hearts and minds.
THE LESSONS OF EASTER ISLAND KEY AND TEACHER’S NOTES
This superb text is a chapter out of a book by the author but available online at the address specified above. I originally used the book to prepare the questions and never posted it not being aware that an online edition was available. My friend and colleague Oya Özağaç having discovered it online, I can now share it with you. The true story of Easter Island is a horror story detailing the ultimate consequences of deforestation and the depths to which humanity will sink when it is a matter of life and death. It is a must have in any reading program that stresses environmental concerns.
1.       Yet despite its superficial insignificance, the history of Easter Island is a grim warning to the world
2.       He found a society in a primitive state with about 3000 people living in squalid reed huts or caves, engaged in almost perpetual warfare resorting to cannibalism in a desperate attempt to supplement…
3.       The primitive people living in such poverty stricken and backward conditions when the Europeans first visited the Island could not have been responsible for such a socially advanced and technologically complex task as…
4.       The people inherited a tradition of monumental sculpture and stone work similar to the grat Inca achievements.
5.       It expresses the main point of the article, the reason why it was written in the first place. The second sentence expresses the main idea
6.       Shortest answer: The Polynesians were the most widely spread people on earth encompassing a huge triangle from…
7.       It was inhospitable: drainage was bad, there were no permanent streams on the island, the island had only a few species of plants and animals, the waters around the island contained very few fish.
8.       The climate was too severe for semi-tropical fruits such as breadfruit and coconut and extremely marginal for the usual mainstays of their diet taro and breadfruit. / cultivation of the sweet potato was not very demanding and left plenty of time for other activities.
9.       It was the organization and competition and probably conflict between the clans that produced both the major achievements of Easter Island society and ultimately its collapse.
10.   A number of the ahu have sophisticated astronomical alignments, usually towards one of the solstices or the equinox.
11.   The most challenging problem was to transport the statues; the cause of the collapse and the key to understanding the mysteries of Easter Island was massive environmental degradation brought on by deforestation of the whole island.
12.   Recent scientific work involving analysis of pollen types has shown that at the time of the initial settlement, Easter Island had a dense vegetation cover including extensive woods.
13.   The moving of statues
14.   They resorted to stone shelters cut into the hillside or flimsy reed huts( minimum); only reed boats incapable of long voyages could be made.
15.   Diminishing resources; the amount of protein available fell
16.   They were unable to devise a system that allowed them to find the right balance with their environment. OR, no account was taken of how few trees there were on the island.
17.   Open ended.

VOCABULARY
paragraph
1
Lack of importance
insignificance

2
Very small, insufficient (1. half)
Meager

4
That which cannot be altered
Irreversible

4
To put up with
Withstand

5
Include, cover (2nd half)
Encompass

6
Survival
Subsistance

10
Enormous (2nd half)
Prodigious

11
Very serious (1. half)
Drastic

12
To deteriorate (1. half)
Regress

12
Terrible (1. half)
Devastating

13
To keep and protect
sustain
REFERALS
1.       It’s: the history of Easter Island’s
2.       This theory: that the island was first settled from South America is sufficient although the rest would be correct too
3.       It : The history of Easter Island
4.       They : The original Polynesians
5.       Which: the extended family
6.       Where: Orongo
7.       It: society
8.       This: moving the large number of enormously heavy statues to ceremonial sites around the island
9.       It: the fact that the islanders painstakingly constructed, over many centuries, one of the most advanced societies of its type in the world